Rejected but not Dejected

Why have I put this up? Well its definitely not because I want to show how good my work is, but because I'm sad that an illustration like this one couldn't convince my audience. NOT A GOOD WAY OF SHOWING MANUFACTURING OF BREAD.....Just plain simple sad :( Spirits are high, I willl come up with something.

ArtWheels

No idea why I made this. Just having fun with some forms, colours and patterns. When I look at it, it reminds me of the book I'm reading as of now (laws of simplicity by John Maeda). Randomness and boredom got me to a stage where I can represent my frustration in a composition. I guess my state of mind at this stage is quite predictable